I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Jacob here from Hornby Primary School. Next time you should add some writing. I think it is good that you have a photo and a title. My mum has to make me make my bed.
Malo e lelei Levi. Nice work! Maybe next time you could add some more writing to make it a tiny bit more interesting, I also like how you in the community part cleaning up because we need to save the world! I totally agree on that part. - Milla
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Hello Jacob here from Hornby Primary School. Next time you should add some writing. I think it is good that you have a photo and a title. My mum has to make me make my bed.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Levi.
ReplyDeleteYou have shared some good ideas for ways to contribute. Can you think of any others that you can do?
Malo e lelei Levi.
ReplyDeleteNice work! Maybe next time you could add some more writing to make it a tiny bit more interesting, I also like how you in the community part cleaning up because we need to save the world! I totally agree on that part. - Milla