I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Hamish I go to Hornby Primary School. I enjoyed the part when you were dancing. You brought me back to when I was dancing one day. I had fun when I watched my old school.
hi levi its benaiah here i liked the way you put the video but they don't work :( you brought me back to when i could hear you and watching you i noticed that you did not't put that much words good bye
hi levi its brodie i like the way you put the video on put it doesn't work. did you think about you where going to dance in front of every body.why did you put this on your blog ok blog you later.
Hi Levi,I'm Raewyn (Stephanie's little sister) I enjoyed the part when like some people were going to the back, I also hear your Dad yelling your name. this part reminded me that my sister was there too (I also recorded her). I have nothing to do what was helpful. it looks cool :)
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Hi my name is Hamish I go to Hornby Primary School. I enjoyed the part
ReplyDeletewhen you were dancing. You brought me back to when I was dancing one day. I had fun when I watched my old school.
hi levi its benaiah here
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put the video but they don't work :(
you brought me back to when i could hear you and watching you
i noticed that you did not't put that much words
good bye
hi levi its brodie i like the way you put the video on put it doesn't work.
ReplyDeletedid you think about you where going to dance in front of every body.why did you put this on your blog ok blog you later.
Hi Levi,I'm Raewyn (Stephanie's little sister) I enjoyed the part when like some people were going to the back, I also hear your Dad yelling your name. this part reminded me that my sister was there too (I also recorded her). I have nothing to do what was helpful. it looks cool :)
ReplyDeleteHi ti s James I think yor blog is cool
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