I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi its Jack from karoro School, I think your slide is cool but why did you make the to girls run from the boy because I would have added an adult or teacher in and made the girls run to the teacher and then made the boy get in trouble. I think that would encourage the people to go to the teacher instead of letting it keep going around the school. Other than that it looks really good.
Kia, ora Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I found it fun but the reason's is if you are getting bullied you go to a teacher not run away so you can get it sorted! Maybe next time check your spelling also, I also did enjoy it was interesting from -Milla
Kia ora Levi I am Ethan From Gilberthorpe school I like your side about bullying because it teaches me not to bully and It also teaches me that it will hurt someone's feelings. My favourite part was when the two girls got in the car and drove away from the bully and the bully couldn't catch the two girls. But I have a question on slide 17 did the left girl meant to say "Hurry let's go to mine" I don't know if that is right. But anyway it is cool the slide so Bye!
Kia Ora, I liked the way you made it look a bit realistic, did you think about putting a teacher in and the girls can run to the teacher so that it is more realistic. How come you have not finsihed the slide already, it was posted 2 months ago as of October 17. Can you please put how the girls made it to the middle of the building, and how was there a random car. This is a great animation too, but this is something weird, there is an arm holding something where the car is on the bottom right.
Hi my name is gemeve form gilberthorpe school wow this is a really cool slide maybe next time you could put more information onto it so your odench knows what is bulling
Hi, Levi it's Hunter here. I like this post because it teaches you the importance to not bully. This reminds me of my bullying slide. Some advice would be to not post something that you have finished. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
Hello levi This is Noah From Gilberthorpe school whakamanawa Christchurch. I think you should finish your animation cause I am very interested in your bully animation. I am saying this for everybody. FINISH THE ANIMATION! Sorry for the yelling. Bye. Sincerly = NOAH.
Kia ora Levi Can you fixs the sentens that don't make sene like hurry let's go mine you can turn it into hurry let's go to mine. but you guys did good bye
Hi my name is Nuradiin, I am in room 18 Owairaka District School. I really liked you post about bullying but next time you should try prof read your story, so it will make sense.
Hi its Jack from Karoro School, I think you did a good job and I don't think there should be any bullys. It does not make sense that they ran to the car instead of running to the teacher. If they kept going to the teacher, a teacher could help stop the bullying. Next time you should put some more work into finishing the slide presentation. other than that I liked it.
I really like your slide show it is easy to follow and simple to understand. Next time you could add some more informative slides but overall great job and keep it up. How would you deal with a bully?
Hi my name is Jullien, I am from Hornby High School. I Like how you made animation but it doesn't make sense instead running to the car and leaving, they should just go to a teacher or staff members in the school so they can help.I would like to see more information about what tools you used to this slide show.
Hi my name is Hunter I am from Hornby High School I like the slid but maybe you cod have made it a bit long. Maybe you could have written a bit more why you didn't because I don't really understand why you did? Can you tech my how you did it.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi its Jack from karoro School,
ReplyDeleteI think your slide is cool but why did you make the to girls run from the boy because I would have added an adult or teacher in and made the girls run to the teacher and then made the boy get in trouble. I think that would encourage the people to go to the teacher instead of letting it keep going around the school. Other than that it looks really good.
Hi it is Joe from Karoro School. I like your work. Next time can you make the writing bigger. I though it was good and fun to watch.
ReplyDeleteKia, ora Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I found it fun but the reason's is if you are getting bullied you go to a teacher not run away so you can get it sorted! Maybe next time check your spelling also, I also did enjoy it was interesting from -Milla
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Levi I am Ethan From Gilberthorpe school
ReplyDeleteI like your side about bullying because it teaches me not to bully and It also teaches me that it will hurt someone's feelings. My favourite part was when the two girls got in the car and drove away from the bully and the bully couldn't catch the two girls. But I have a question on slide 17 did the left girl meant to say "Hurry let's go to mine" I don't know if that is right. But anyway it is cool the slide so Bye!
Kia ora levi i like your Animation. can you put more things in your Animation because i want to see more but that nice #AWESOME
ReplyDeleteKia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you made it look a bit realistic, did you think about putting a teacher in and the girls can run to the teacher so that it is more realistic. How come you have not finsihed the slide already, it was posted 2 months ago as of October 17. Can you please put how the girls made it to the middle of the building, and how was there a random car. This is a great animation too, but this is something weird, there is an arm holding something where the car is on the bottom right.
hi my name is Ethan and i like how you said run it was a smart i der but did you checkr how you writing was good job . Bye .
ReplyDeleteSup Levi can you and the girls put more stuff on there like Kareem said
ReplyDeleteand yah anyways see Ya.
Hi my name is gemeve form gilberthorpe school
ReplyDeletewow this is a really cool slide
maybe next time you could put more information onto it so your odench
knows what is bulling
Hi, Levi it's Hunter here. I like this post because it teaches you the importance to not bully. This reminds me of my bullying slide. Some advice would be to not post something that you have finished. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
ReplyDeleteSup Levi can you and the girls put more stuff on there like Kareem said
ReplyDeleteand yah anyways see Ya # so cool!
Hello levi This is Noah From Gilberthorpe school whakamanawa Christchurch. I think you should finish your animation cause I am very interested in your bully animation. I am saying this for everybody.
ReplyDeleteFINISH THE ANIMATION! Sorry for the yelling. Bye. Sincerly = NOAH.
Kia ora Levi
ReplyDeleteCan you fixs the sentens that don't make sene like hurry let's go mine you can turn it into hurry let's go to mine.
but you guys did good bye
Hi levi Jesse here it can't just end like that you should do more work on it so you can finish it do it in your free time. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Levi Merryn here. This is a cool animation I cant wait to see the end when you are doing good ! Blog you Later !
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Nuradiin,
ReplyDeleteI am in room 18 Owairaka District School. I really liked you post about bullying but next time you should try prof read your story, so it will make sense.
Hi its Jack from Karoro School,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job and I don't think there should be any bullys. It does not make sense that they ran to the car instead of running to the teacher. If they kept going to the teacher, a teacher could help stop the bullying. Next time you should put some more work into finishing the slide presentation. other than that I liked it.
Hi Levi,
ReplyDeleteI really like your slide show it is easy to follow and simple to understand. Next time you could add some more informative slides but overall great job and keep it up. How would you deal with a bully?
Thanks,
Tai
Hi Levi I like your post about Movie Star planet if you msp how long have you been playing msp. I hate bully's I think there shouldn't be any bully's
ReplyDeleteWhat you favourite part about msp?
Hi my name is Jullien,
ReplyDeleteI am from Hornby High School. I Like how you made animation but it doesn't make sense instead running to the car and leaving, they should just go to a teacher or staff members in the school so they can help.I would like to see more information about what tools you used to this slide show.
Hi my name is Hunter I am from Hornby High School
ReplyDeleteI like the slid but maybe you cod have made it a bit long.
Maybe you could have written a bit more why you didn't because I don't really understand why you did?
Can you tech my how you did it.