I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi levi I like the way you have some of the old cars to look at maby next time you could put more things about the old day cars I would love to no about them and maby a little bit more sildes about them and what they look like anyways ill see yea later bye..
Hi Levi it is me Kareem, nice putting the pictures on but you should add some information so the slide is not just pictures. Also add a better introduction please. Good job
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ReplyDeletegood job levi
ReplyDeleteHi levi I like the way you have some of the old cars to look at maby next time you could put more things about the old day cars I would love to no about them and maby a little bit more sildes about them and what they look like anyways ill see yea later bye..
ReplyDeleteHi Levi it is me Kareem, nice putting the pictures on but you should add some information so the slide is not just pictures. Also add a better introduction please. Good job
ReplyDeleteHi Levi it is Lacie here. good job but maybe next time you should add some words. Maybe next time do not make it about cars.
ReplyDeletehi l am from gliberthorpe this is a amzing bacause you knockeb my socks off your work is cool
ReplyDeletehi levi its a great slide but you need some more words and some more slides on the slide blog you later
ReplyDeleteHi Levi
ReplyDeleteI like the pictures, but next time try to put info about the cars . Bye.
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hi levi like how you hove informanshon but more words
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