I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia orana Levi Shyla here, Great slide I really enjoyed it!The last 4 pages had nothing on it. Maybe next time make sure you check all of your slides!Something I noticed was all the effort you had put into that slide. This is a question.Were you thinking of putting more information? Blog ya later!
Hi Levi its Ethan H here I like how you put a lego car in the first slide I have a question did you build that lego car.I also like the nissan in slide 4.Maybe next time put more information in the text in the slides.But other then that it is a cool slide.blog you later!
Hi Levi You sure like cars and other things. Next time you could put more info like how they work but slide 5 6 7 and 8 have nothing in them next time make sure you look at all your slide's.
Hi Levi I like how you used really cool cars in that slide. Maybe you might have to think about the size that your post is and there is nothing on the last four slides. I think you putt everything into this. FROM PETER.
Malo a le Hey Levi great job! I think You got help building that lego car when you made slide 4 do you mean nissan not skyline nice job anyway it is good to see you complete your slide. You should send this to mr wilkonson nice job. You should work on your spelling and just to let you know that you wrote another wrong i like it. it is good hopley i get to see another one see Ya By Ruavai
Hi Levi, I like the slide you did what was on the four slides? let us know if you add more detail on the 4 slides. You did very well in the slide. But it was amazing I got intrested before the 4 slides came but how do you felt when you made the slide? is there people who helped you made the slide?
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hi levi i like the nissan
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Levi it's Siyona here just saying dose cars involve school if it dose put some more informashon like why how and what for nblog you later.
ReplyDeleteyou are really in to your cars
ReplyDeletethis is amazing you put a lot of work into this
there is a blank slide it is on number 6
You need to finish your slide's please so we can see what is look like
ReplyDeleteits awesome and the cars you put on a diffrent slides.
Kia orana Levi Shyla here,
ReplyDeleteGreat slide I really enjoyed it!The last 4 pages had nothing on it. Maybe next time make sure you check all of your slides!Something I noticed was all the effort you had put into that slide. This is a question.Were you thinking of putting more information? Blog ya later!
Hi Ievi and i like that fidget spinner and good job keep it up by bailey.
ReplyDeleteHi Levi its Ethan H here
ReplyDeleteI like how you put a lego car in the first slide I have a question did you build that lego car.I also like the nissan in slide 4.Maybe next time put more information in the text in the slides.But other then that it is a cool slide.blog you later!
Hi Levi
ReplyDeleteYou sure like cars and other things. Next time you could put more info like how they work but slide 5 6 7 and 8 have nothing in them next time make sure you look at all your slide's.
Hi Levi I like how you used really cool cars in that slide.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you might have to think about the size that your post is and there is nothing on the last four slides.
I think you putt everything into this.
FROM PETER.
Malo a le
ReplyDeleteHey Levi great job! I think You got help building that lego car when you made slide 4 do you mean nissan not skyline nice job anyway it is good to see you complete your slide.
You should send this to mr wilkonson nice job.
You should work on your spelling and just to let you know that you wrote another wrong i like it. it is good hopley i get to see another one
see Ya
By Ruavai
Hi Levi, I like the slide you did what was on the four slides? let us know if you add more detail on the 4 slides. You did very well in the slide. But it was amazing I got intrested before the 4 slides came but how do you felt when you made the slide? is there
ReplyDeletepeople who helped you made the slide?
hi levi your blog is cool and funny
ReplyDeletehi Levi i like the way you made it did you know you have 4 pictures but 8 slides why did you do only do 4
ReplyDeleteHey Levi Its Jonte here. i like your cash fight spinner.
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